
Your website gets visitors. Your services are described. Your About page is thoughtful, your testimonials are glowing, and your booking link works. So why isn’t your website turning visitors into clients?
Very often, it’s not what’s on your website. It’s the order it’s in.
I’m Kate, founder of Dear Kate Brand Strategy. I’ve been building websites since 2011, first for my own photography business and later for photographers, coaches, and service providers. The most common issue I see isn’t missing information. It’s good information sitting in the wrong spot, where the people who need it never find it.
In the video, I walk through a real website, The Laundress, a tarot and astrology business in New Jersey, and show exactly what I’d change:
Your website’s job isn’t to convince everyone. It’s to help the right people figure out, quickly, that you’re what they’re looking for.
Think of it like a trailhead sign. A good one doesn’t try to talk every hiker into the same trail. It tells you the distance, the difficulty, and where the trail ends up, so you can choose the one that fits. Some people head up. Some turn around. Both are good outcomes.
The Laundress is a great example of a site with plenty of good information that’s hard to use. The About page is full of thoughtful writing about how the owner uses tarot and astrology for personal growth. The offer pages explain each reading clearly. But a first-time visitor gets the biggest guidebook on the shelf and no trail map. Everything they need is in there somewhere. They just don’t know where to start, and most won’t stick around to find out.
By the time someone lands on your homepage, you’ve already done the hard work. They found you on Instagram, at a networking event, in an email, or on Google. Now they’re quietly asking:
If those answers aren’t obvious in the first few seconds, they leave.
On The Laundress homepage, the top spot goes to a playful headline: “Do you believe in magic?” It’s fun, but it doesn’t answer any of the four questions. The text that actually explains the business sits on top of a graphic, where it’s easy to miss. And the first button sends visitors straight to a newsletter signup before they’ve learned anything about the services.
None of those are big flaws on their own. Together, they make a visitor work too hard.
Here’s the flow I recommend for most service-based homepages. (For the full framework behind it, see what to put on your service-based business homepage.) Each section answers the next question a visitor has.
Your headline should make it clear what you do and who it’s for. Add your location if you serve a local area. For The Laundress, that could look like:
Psycho-spiritual help for those who want radical and magical change.
New Jersey & Virtual Tarot and Astrology
That location line pulls double duty. It gives Google useful keywords, and it lets visitors sort themselves out right away: local and ready, or happy to book virtually.
Make the button here the action you most want people to take, like Book a Session. The newsletter can wait.
It’s tempting to open with “Here’s what I’m about.” But visitors are far more interested in their own situation than in our story, at least at first. Keep the word “I” out of this section and describe where your reader is right now.
Here’s a draft I wrote for The Laundress, pulled almost entirely from writing already on the About page:
You know that thing you keep doing? The pattern you swear you were done with, the decision you keep circling, the question that’s been rattling around in your head, even though somewhere underneath all that noise you probably already know the answer.
Sometimes you need a different way to look at it. Tarot and astrology aren’t here to tell you who you are or predict what happens next. Think of them as mirrors, ways to step outside your own head for a minute and see your patterns, your gifts, your wounds, and the bigger picture a little more clearly.
Notice nothing new was invented. The material was already there. It just moved to where a new visitor would actually read it, and turned to face the reader.
For each offer, cover the problem it solves, what the client gets, and who it’s best for. When people can see themselves in one option, they don’t have to guess.
Right after your offers, add testimonials, credentials, or results. This is where visitors start feeling confident about saying yes.
The Laundress has lovely testimonials, but they live on a separate page called Love, where few people will find them. Testimonials work hardest when they’re scattered across the pages where people decide: the homepage, every service page, and the contact page.
Now is the time for a short bio and a great photo. Not your full life story. Just enough to show why you’re the right person to help. If you’re not sure what that is yet, here’s where to find your reason to choose you. If your About page is long, this is a good place to borrow the best few lines.
By this point, some readers are ready. Give them another easy way to book.
For visitors who aren’t ready yet, the newsletter is a great way to stay connected. It just belongs at the end of the path, not the beginning.
The Laundress menu has eight options. For a first-time visitor, that’s a lot of forks in the trail.
A few simple fixes go a long way:
Your menu should help people find the next step, not show them every possible option at once.
Just over half of website visits now happen on mobile, so the flow needs to work on a small screen as well. To preview any site in Google Chrome (Google calls this device mode), right-click the page, choose Inspect, then click the phone-and-tablet icon at the top of the panel.
Pull up your own homepage and ask yourself:
If any of those made you wince a little, that’s your starting point for turning visitors into clients. And if you built your site yourself, these common DIY website fixes are a good next read.
Getting your website clear and organized does more than help with turning visitors into clients. It becomes the home base for all your messaging, the place where you’ve already figured out what your people need to hear and in what order.
So when it’s time to write an email or post on Instagram, you’re not starting from scratch. You know what to say, and every piece of marketing points back to one place that’s ready to close the sale.
If this post has you looking at your own homepage a little differently, start with a plan before you touch your design.
Plan, design, and launch a website that actually gets you clients, without the overwhelm.
This free, workbook-style planner walks you through three phases:
It’s the roadmap I wish I’d had when I built my first site.
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